Need Feedback!

Feedback:

1. Way too slow. The pace should be faster (also what is this low pitch narration? Ask on fiverr if you are not confident about your voice or get a better ai?)
2. The first 20 seconds are most important to get the viewer hooked in and you spend the first 20 seconds for a logo animation that no one cares about.
3. Thumbnail is nice.

Thanks for the feedback.. Appreciate it!
Now I come to think about it.. most of the things you mentioned are right. I will rectify these points in my next Video.