Ruthlessly delete things. Everybody knows a SWE with less than a year of experience has nothing much to offer. May sound harsh, but it is what it is. Unless you have a PhD or something
Only point #1 in achievements is actually an achievement. Remove the others
Positions of responsibility are not really required for entry level SWE roles
Remove the MLH block. Hardly provides any signal
I’d remove skills summary as well. When you write “ReactJS” it doesn’t indicate your competence with this tech stack. Your experience should indicate your competence with the tech stack.
Remove weasel words such as “leveraged”. Remove “received opportunity…”