FuzzyNoodle
FuzzyNoodle
7mo
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Student

AI rates it 8/10

FreshGrad, looking for PM roles, roast the hell out of it.

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7mo ago
SleepyCoconut
SleepyCoconut

As a recruiter, I see most of what is here is relevant. Always highlight your numbers on the resume so that people know that your emphasis is on outcomes because at any role, that is going to be the end goal.

If you could throw in a "problem statement followed by solution and impact" structure, most resumes become a 9 or 9.5

FluffyDonut
FluffyDonut

Please share a sample resume, it would be very helpful.

FuzzyNoodle
FuzzyNoodle
Student
7mo

Please check dm

SleepyRaccoon
SleepyRaccoon

Lol, if this 8/10 then i am glad that AI is not going to take any jobs anytime soon🤣

PerkyCupcake
PerkyCupcake

AI doesnt make anyone feel like a clown. We never know

FluffyUnicorn
FluffyUnicorn

Bro this is resume is in a decent position currently. Here’s what I feel you can do to make it better:

  1. Lead with results - metrics that you moved and then proceed to explain the actions (methods and solutions you used)
  2. There’s overuse of “collaborated” id ask you to present more of “owning” like led, designed, improved, etc. I can understand you might not have owned the entire thing but whatever you did - explain and be unabashed about it
  3. Cut the fluff - adjectives like aesthetic don’t have a place in resume; avoid multi-clause bullets like there are points which talk about multiple things
  4. Present metrics and other key info in consistent format - baseline to improvement and timeline
  5. From the cv it looks like you worked heavily in the discovery funnels and ecommerce logistics - so don’t be afraid to go deep into it
  6. Take for example your discovery related points - mention the test results - ctr, cvr, impressions, retention whichever way you do calculate it
  7. Leading a redesign is a big effort - how did it improve conversions for first time users and new users (platform wide), how well did it improve conversion to other assets like brand pages category pages etc - build the funnel get the data and enrich it
  8. For the logistics effort - again add SLAs

My personal opinion would be to stay and work more longer projects to stay growth and consistency. Ofc make this resume better by all and hunt jobs

FuzzyNoodle
FuzzyNoodle
Student
7mo

Please check dm

CosmicMochi
CosmicMochi

Please do add in education details.
The metrics are alright...but can you add more details as to how you have achieved them?

FuzzyNoodle
FuzzyNoodle
Student
7mo

Have hidden education details, and yes working on the mentioned part

GigglyWalrus
GigglyWalrus

Shorten your work experience pointers into smaller and easily readable line. Everyone makes this mistake early in their careers by describing their work-ex in paragraphs

GigglyWalrus
GigglyWalrus

*readable lines

FuzzyNoodle
FuzzyNoodle
Student
7mo

Made this

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GoofyDumpling
GoofyDumpling

This resume looks like my college answer sheet for an essay question.
Headers, Sub-headers, followed by acronyms from textbook in middle of my sentence Result: just hoping the examiner doesn't read the whole answer.

QuirkyHamster
QuirkyHamster

Nowadays, AI is often the first to read and screen resumes. So we have to create resumes ATS friendly. And this one looks good in that aspect.

BouncyUnicorn
BouncyUnicorn

Don't write paragraphs, write bullet points instead. Highlights achievement and the outcome.
Remove words like worked, collaborated etc. as these do not show your ownership.

QuirkyHamster
QuirkyHamster

How did you create this format? A LaTeX template?

FuzzyNoodle
FuzzyNoodle
Student
7mo

Overleaf

ZoomyKoala
ZoomyKoala
7mo

I have tables and stuff in my resume. Is it true that ATS has difficulty parsing tables and I should modify mine?

TwirlyBanana
TwirlyBanana

Yes no tables

DerpyWalrus
DerpyWalrus

Yes please.

FuzzyNoodle
FuzzyNoodle
Student
7mo

Sorry context?

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